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~~In Need of a Friend~~

Guess what?
I cried today
And no one saw me
Just like yesterday

My heart hurt today
Though I didn't tell anyone
Because they wouldn't really care
To them I'm just scum

I tried once before
To tell all of my friends
Of the things that scarred me
But they didn't have a helping hand to lend

So I locked up all of these emotions
Into a deep dark abyss
And I though I thought I wouldn't care
Those feelings, I now miss

I put on my best smile
And try my best not to cry
But now I know it's pointless
As I take a look up at the sky

I've tried my best to do what I can
I tried my best to make amends
But the words that haunted me finally come out
'All I need is a friend'
I was feeling a little depressed when I wrote this. I was worrying about this stupid little thing that seemed to take over my life. My friends noticed how I was depressed though. They're such good friends! I love you guys!! :tighthug: But some other people just seemed to kick me to the ground even more than I thought possible. :surrender: So all in all this was just a poem I wanted to write. Hope you all like it and please comment!
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Moo-Says-The-Fish Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011
It's funny, really, you see exactly as I do. But.. I wont tell anyone that. The last thing I want is for others to worry about me.


Great job by the way! I love reading your poems! ^-^
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! Plus I get that a lot. That my poems relate to the people who read them.
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Moo-Says-The-Fish Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
I try to do that in my poems but.... My poems usually aren't... I dont know... Peopel just can't.... Arg! I can't explain it! >.<
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol It's okay. I'm sure your poems are still great! :D
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Moo-Says-The-Fish Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
I hope so! ^-^
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anime-girl13 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2011
:iconsadhugplz: I love poems that show such emotion. I sometimes write like this, too. :)
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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anime-girl13 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011
:hug:
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PurpleBanana15 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
Awwwwwwwwwwww :( Ill be your friend!
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol Nice to know.
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Isenia Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
Wow, I don't like poems and such normally. But yours seem to pin-point my life and feelings so well. They're really good. :)
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I get that a lot.
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Isenia Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
You're welcome. ^^
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starisis9 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
this is really pretty. you should check out my poem "goodbye" it talks about friends parting ways.
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Sure will!
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starisis9 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
much obliged!
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hawkfoamreplacment Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love the poem again! so true! :D
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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hawkfoamreplacment Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no probs! :)
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IscritRisana Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011
Eh-hem.

Some-times in our lives
We all have pain
We all have - sooo-roooow.
But - if we are wise
We know that there's
Always to-moooorroooow.

Leeean o-on me,
When you're not strong,
And I'll be your friend -
I'll help you caaaarry ooooon.
For
It won't be long
Till I'm gonna need
Somebody to leeeeeeeean oooooooooon.


That is the last time I'm doing that.
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol Thank you!
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blackstar707 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifully written, and very true.
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Jaggedwave Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
Do you really want me to try talking to you about this?
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol Do you want to?
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Jaggedwave Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
If you are sure that you won't be mad if I get all weird and depressing.
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Okay. Cross my heart.
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Jaggedwave Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
Ok then....
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LisyDogz777 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
This really made me think. :aww:
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah.
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platinaoi Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010
Naaaahh don't be depressed! Your poem made me want to sing the disney song "a friend like me" (from Aladdin I think), okay that was random *goes away*
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:lmao: Funny! Glad you liked it!
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platinaoi Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010
:D
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