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~~In Need of a Friend~~

Guess what?
I cried today
And no one saw me
Just like yesterday

My heart hurt today
Though I didn't tell anyone
Because they wouldn't really care
To them I'm just scum

I tried once before
To tell all of my friends
Of the things that scarred me
But they didn't have a helping hand to lend

So I locked up all of these emotions
Into a deep dark abyss
And I though I thought I wouldn't care
Those feelings, I now miss

I put on my best smile
And try my best not to cry
But now I know it's pointless
As I take a look up at the sky

I've tried my best to do what I can
I tried my best to make amends
But the words that haunted me finally come out
'All I need is a friend'
I was feeling a little depressed when I wrote this. I was worrying about this stupid little thing that seemed to take over my life. My friends noticed how I was depressed though. They're such good friends! I love you guys!! :tighthug: But some other people just seemed to kick me to the ground even more than I thought possible. :surrender: So all in all this was just a poem I wanted to write. Hope you all like it and please comment!
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Moo-Says-The-Fish Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011
It's funny, really, you see exactly as I do. But.. I wont tell anyone that. The last thing I want is for others to worry about me.


Great job by the way! I love reading your poems! ^-^
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! Plus I get that a lot. That my poems relate to the people who read them.
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Moo-Says-The-Fish Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
I try to do that in my poems but.... My poems usually aren't... I dont know... Peopel just can't.... Arg! I can't explain it! >.<
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol It's okay. I'm sure your poems are still great! :D
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Moo-Says-The-Fish Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
I hope so! ^-^
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anime-girl13 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2011
:iconsadhugplz: I love poems that show such emotion. I sometimes write like this, too. :)
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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anime-girl13 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011
:hug:
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PurpleBanana15 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
Awwwwwwwwwwww :( Ill be your friend!
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xpeople1 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol Nice to know.
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