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Last Words

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~~Last Words~~

My legs will run and run
My body will be carried far away
You said to me that you loved me
And those are the last words I'll ever hear you say

We were once close to each other
Promised to stay together until the end
Nothing could ever come between us
We were the best of friends

But those three little words
They did something to me
They opened my heart
It was like they were the key

My heart spilled open
And you could see me for who I was
And I was frightened you'd hate me
So now we'll never see each other again because...

My legs will run and run
My body will be carried far away
You said to me that you loved me
And those are the last words I'll ever hear you say
This was one of my older poems. It seems sort of unfinished to me for some reason, but hopefully it's still good.

I hope you guys like it! :D

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williamszm's avatar
I really liked how you repeated the first stanza, especially because that one was my favorite. :) But it really wraps it up nicely, and I agree that it sounds quite finished. Nice work!